ignorant now

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    ignorant now

    the times that i wish
    for everything to stop
    with you creeping closer
    my head filled with thoughts

    just a second to stare
    without you to see
    so you can't hide your eyes
    maybe then i could breathe

    the times that i wish
    wish, for silence

    the nights that i dream
    of a moment less cruel
    the timing less painful
    i've shown you the fool

    as i trip over loss
    and fall into shame
    i'm trapped inside regret
    drowning in pain

    the nights that i dream
    dream i'm not seen

    so fuck what i am
    and fuck all my words
    a waste of breath is my tongue
    and my soul is unheard

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    stellar commented on ignorant now

    07-14-2010

    wonderful execution of emotion....beautiful...............

    commonreactor

    07/16/2010

    Thank you, Stellar! I'm looking forward to reading your work. I really enjoyed your analogy of cameras to poets in your biography. :)

    cheronld commented on ignorant now

    07-14-2010

    Wow...this is really a great poem....raw and to the core...the in your face approach was awesome....truly a great write...Cher

    commonreactor

    07/16/2010

    Thank you very much! Sometimes that's the best approach ;-)

    knight4696 commented on ignorant now

    07-13-2010

    CR! This is a great debute poem - full of emotion and great flow - The subject is so relatable and the feelings will be shared by many! Nice way to grab the readers attention! :) Great job! :) Ken

    Crush commented on ignorant now

    03-26-2010

    this would make a really good song ! well done ! i a stratocaster and distant drums.

    commonreactor

    03/27/2010

    Thank you! One day I'll actually pick up the guitar again... I appreciate the comment :)

    Qualin commented on ignorant now

    08-01-2009

    comes with the territory ...............qualin

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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