I'll be there for you...(revised)

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I'll be there for you...(revised)


I'll Be There(revised)

When you just want to run...
Just run away from it all....
When no one seems to care for you....
When no one seems to care at all....
If it gets to be to much for you to bare....
I'll be there for you....
Is there anyone around,anyone at all....
As if the whole world has walked out on you....
You feel all alone and don't know what to do...
When the one you care about the most...
Doesen't seem to care about you...
Know this,I'll be there for you....
When the one you gave your heart to...
Only just throws it back into your face...
When the person you trusted betrays you...
All the memories with which you shared...
Can't even remember your birthday...
I'll be there for you...
When all you need is a friend....
When friends are hard to find...
Just to be there when you cry.....
Just to hear you whine...
All you need is for someone to catch your tears....
I'll be there for you...
When your heart hurts so bad....
You can't hardly breath...
When you want to crawl up and die....
I'll be there for you...
When you start to cry after hearing a sad song...
And the tears won't stop rainning down...
I'll be there for you...
It's a promise I make to you...
Should you ever need me...
All you need is to call....
And I'll be there for you....

(revised by Bryan)

 

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alreedus commented on I'll be there for you...(revised)

03-02-2010

Lots of vision and imagery plus a very positive message - selfless Thank you -Alan

Kukia

03/02/2010

TY,I appreciate ur critiuqe

ditr052009 commented on I'll be there for you...(revised)

03-01-2010

i like this one very much! it is very deep and very heartfelt

Kukia

03/01/2010

TY as with ur works,ur also very heart felt

hoda commented on I'll be there for you...(revised)

02-28-2010

Sweet poem! I really like how the words flow as I read it out loud. Great job. ^_^

Kukia

02/28/2010

TY hoda,I'm happy u liked it

am2anangel commented on I'll be there for you...(revised)

02-28-2010

loved it. sweet and endearing. such wonderful sentiments. well written.-tonya

Kukia

02/28/2010

TY very much Tonya,very kind of you to say

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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