Illusions

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Illusions

nothing to say, as words are decieving
lost and alone, too familiar a feeling
my journey through life, to me is a joke
i try so hard, yet everytime i choke
i'll never make it, im destined to fail
these words, run deep, as if eched by nail
every turn i make, another closed door
my confidence is shattered, laid out on the floor
i am invisible, not noticed at all
screaming for help, do you hear my call
for your hand i reach, yet only find air
in a flash you're gone, when for a moment you were there
i thought i saw you, as clear as day
the vision of you, it just went away
is it my fault, what did i do
i must have done something, to be feeling this blue
my life is a mess, without you around
not sure what to do, afraid i will drown
i dont have the answers, i wish that i did
having control, heaven forbid
i want to try, for what it seems
everyone else has, its all in my dreams
i'll never make it, they'll never come true
dreams made to be broken, my confidence was too

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ltroxell commented on Illusions

03-15-2009

very good work. It evokes sadness, fear and lonliness. Good for you.

EvilPoems commented on Illusions

03-11-2009

true true i understand your pain... my emotional ones are smiluar.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

CopperTop327’s Poems (24)

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Lost In A World Of Chaos 5
Alone 2
Choices 2
Pain 0
The Hell I've Created 1
Those Wiser Than Us 2
Waiting 0
Love 1
Ashes To Ashes 1
You And Me 0
You Can 0
Because Of You 0
Forget 1
Thoughts 2
Broken Hearts 3
WHY?! 0
Birthdays 2
Waiting For A Sign 0
Not The One 0
I'm Here 0
Lost Inside My Head 1
Our Poem 1
I am nothing 1
Illusions 2