I'm Back....

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  • Altair
  • Don't read me, I am not that good.......

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Just another one...take it for what it is...Me

I'm Back....

Hello world, my swirling thoughts returned to this earth
the birth of a new expression is dispersed
but first in the midst of the search for my voice
I embrace the quiet nature of the turf that I surf
floating in the warm breeze that washes my frame
I watch the lofty plain of my heart contemplate
reasons, seasons, wind in motions
open up my eyes to its juxtaposition
I cannot share all my thoughts in submission
but in metaphor it feels like a voiding collection
in which I spill forth all my darkest confessions
into a black hole where nothing escapes it
not even light can avoid the destruction
all my thoughts and words are ripped into nothing
formed into something of a pleated compression
may not make sense to you or the rest of them
but to me it's like simple conversation
conversed with myself and my heart in sessions
spread upon the page to all in limitation
For if I truly divulged my mind in one lesson
singularity would be the form, my manifestation.
Oh yeah I forgot this is supposed to be my expression
not a rant about my insurrection in creation.
So let the clouds rain on this parade as I fade
into poetry elated by the recent cascade.
I walk the golden trail of the sands of time
while absorbing each grain encompassing mind
compensating mine unfinished form confined
in the shine of the ball of refined fire divine.
This is a crime, sublime to dusk's recline
in the sky's essence now darkness inclined
a reminder to rewind, reflect on your life
for the sun sets and moon begets, are you blind?
I left to find myself lost in the midst of the fog
so thick in contour I needed thought to divide
I saw myself residing in the cave of no light
I felt that I needed to shine some insight
reconnect with the part of me that left contrite
all is not lost Mr.king, lets continue to fight
lets continue to right with our will, the mights
the price is not too steep, I said politely
then upon the midst within the cave I became me
again, I stepped out the cave in ascension
looked to the clouds as they rained revision
splattered upon my skin, opened up to let it in
drank the ice cold blend as the waters given
a gift from the heavens so clear and within
I now see through the fog thanks to my collision.
So I have told you things, but nothing at all
between the lines I soar to the heights of stars
pause to inhale the flaws of my cause
to spit out a substance and amp my roar....I'm back

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ginga commented on I'm Back....

06-22-2010

altair, I love the attitude , alwys love your word choices and rhymes and the fantastic rhythm announcing your return! ginga

Rhymer commented on I'm Back....

06-10-2010

I searched the lines to see which was my favorite, finally decided the entire poem is, start to finish. another excellent piece.

SavVySam commented on I'm Back....

06-10-2010

Just stepped out...Well,I am so glad you've returned! Your fans and the world also breath a collected sigh of relief! You are doing what you were designed to do...write! Roar on!

knight4696 commented on I'm Back....

06-08-2010

Altair! You definately are back with a vengence my friend. You always amaze with your creative rhyming and eternally deep metaphoric writes! Great Job Pal! :) Ken

Hampton commented on I'm Back....

06-05-2010

I am overwhelmed by the landslide of words but pleased that you chose to write them and to return.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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