I'm not your princess any more

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I'm not your princess any more

i guess this is how it ends
i guess i was never close enough to stop this
for your words do not phase me like they should 
my prince we are not meant to be
for im not your princess any more 
you lied to me you betrayed me
my trust in you was lost so now...
good bye my love 
i once would have done any thing for you
but then my sister claims that you were down at that woman's house
you said she was nothing
you said you loved only me
well now my prince....
runaway to her go tell her all the things you told me
but be prepared because not everyone is who they seem
i know this all to well
im not your princess any more
she is but i just hope she realises that your not who you seem to be
you are destructive
but let her find out its her choice
i leave you now to let you be with your princess
my prince you where never worthy of my love so
go... run to her... let her comfort you
but remember this my prince
IM NOT YOUR PRINCESS ANY MORE!!!!!!!!!

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frazel5 commented on I'm not your princess any more

10-31-2009

This was a good read. I can feel the hurt in your words. I would suggest you work on your spelling and grammer. You have talent, now just tweak it a little bit and you'll take this poem from good to great. Good job!

bluewolf commented on I'm not your princess any more

08-19-2009

The poem is deeply expressive of the betrayl of love lost. My suggestion are to work on grammer. Good poem otherwise.

slohan4u commented on I'm not your princess any more

08-06-2009

i feel sorry for the princess of this poem. very good poem.

scrye commented on I'm not your princess any more

08-06-2009

Very deep amithis, soo much pain i am so sorry, but the one who truely deserves a love such as this is still out there and when the time is right you will meet. This I know. Great poem with lots of emotion. Good work.

HopeOhlarik commented on I'm not your princess any more

08-06-2009

i can feel the hurt emmiting from the words. i know that feeling. and all i can say is it will get better. great poem!

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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