I'm ready for you

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    • shakeme4life
    • Learn yourself, love yourself, and respect yourself! Your past is but on step towards your future.

    Poem Commentary

    done with games , ready for you ...

    I'm ready for you

    I believe I’m finally ready for you .
    My eyes are twitching sending all kinds 
    Of subtle signs . 
    I’m trying to convince you of what my 
    Heart already knows.
    I now see the chemistry, 
    That brings forth & captures my 
    Smile .
    I have watched as your eyes brighten
    From the mere scent of me.
    I see how you contain your excitement
    Each time I’m around you.
    I believe that I am ready for you
    I am a woman now 
    Able to hold my weight 
    I show you so simply everyday
    That I love myself , 
    So how could I not love you .
    I’ve shown love for your child
    So how can I not love you.
    I cleared my calendar, given
    You my undivided attention.
    Ssshhh , if you listen , you 
    Might feel me .
    My love is strong , and it’s 
    Not taunting you from the end 
    Of a conditional string.
    Heeeeyyyyy ! Yes , you … I’m talking to you 
    This is my spirit talking to you 
    Screaming , WAKE UP !!!
    The coffee isn’t enough…
    Smell the allure of the long term 
    Relationship I yearn for .
    Remember the time before I hurt you 
    Before I wounded your beautiful heart ,
    Cause I remember having to look in your 
    Eyes knowing I am the one that hurt you.
    Do you feel the gravitational pull my heart 
    Has on yours ? 
    Love so unique , it’ll never be copied 
    All I know is that I must take these scattered pieces of 
    Myself , and make some sense of them.
    I don’t know how , since you haven’t 
    Fully committed to be apart of my pieces.
    My heart tells me that I’m ready for you 
    Yet , my mind asks with persistence 
    What is the PRICE ?
    Precisely what I need to know 
    When your away from me .
    The insecurities in me , 
    Can’t help but to thirst for the reasons
    Why your in love with me ?
    My own fear used to keep me from 
    Telling you how much I love you .
    I’m ready to love you 
    Cause with each passing day 
    And wasted opportunity 
    My heart is cut bleeding.
    Something dies inside me each 
    Time I move closer to your love
    I guess it’s to make room for you too.
    I believe I’m finally ready for you .
    My eyes are twitching sending all kinds 
    Of subtle signs . 
    I’m trying to convince you of what my 
    Heart already knows.
    I now see the chemistry, 
    That brings forth & captures my 
    Smile .
    I have watched as your eyes brighten
    From the mere scent of me.
    I see how you contain your excitement
    Each time I’m around you.
    I believe that I am ready for you
    I am a woman now 
    Able to hold my weight 
    I show you so simply everyday
    That I love myself , 
    So how could I not love you .
    I’ve shown love for your child
    So how can I not love you.
    I cleared my calendar, given
    You my undivided attention.
    Ssshhh , if you listen , you 
    Might feel me .
    My love is strong , and it’s 
    Not taunting you from the end 
    Of a conditional string.
    Heeeeyyyyy ! Yes , you … I’m talking to you 
    This is my spirit talking to you 
    Screaming , WAKE UP !!!
    The coffee isn’t enough…
    Smell the allure of the long term 
    Relationship I yearn for .
    Remember the time before I hurt you 
    Before I wounded your beautiful heart ,
    Cause I remember having to look in your 
    Eyes knowing I am the one that hurt you.
    Do you feel the gravitational pull my heart 
    Has on yours ? 
    Love so unique , it’ll never be copied 
    All I know is that I must take these scattered pieces of 
    Myself , and make some sense of them.
    I don’t know how , since you haven’t 
    Fully committed to be apart of my pieces.
    My heart tells me that I’m ready for you 
    Yet , my mind asks with persistence 
    What is the PRICE ?
    Precisely what I need to know 
    When your away from me .
    The insecurities in me , 
    Can’t help but to thirst for the reasons
    Why your in love with me ?
    My own fear used to keep me from 
    Telling you how much I love you .
    I’m ready to love you 
    Cause with each passing day 
    And wasted opportunity 
    My heart is cut bleeding.
    Something dies inside me each 
    Time I move closer to your love
    I guess it’s to make room for you too.

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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on I'm ready for you

    09-07-2011

    Honest, emotional, pleading. I loved the wording and the flow. The yearning to be heard is palpable. Great write.............E

    shakeme4life

    09/07/2011

    Roger that !!! houston we have lift off .....

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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