I'm Still Feelin' Ya Mike

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    • FLAWLES
    • I am the birth of a legend and the mold of an icon; and I've installed myself on the desktop of the world for its inhabitants to keep their eye on.

    Poem Commentary

    There was 'NO WAY' I could have written this without the help of jademelissa74.  She is one of the most gifted artist I have enjoyed on this site.

    EB, not just this;  but many of the poems I've written, are due to your talent, wisdom,--gift.

    Thank you from the bottom and top of my heart.

    I'm Still Feelin' Ya Mike

    They never gave you a chance to cry.

    They’d laugh when you’d break down;  and then, I would ask Why?

    They’d make their jokes; and laugh their laughs

    The laughs came from the have nots, and even from the haves.

     

    You stole the stage, while doing your dance;  and people took it for granted.

    That you were still, a, human being, while your name was, being chanted.

    They gotta say it, “You’re gone Mike.  You’re not coming back.  You’re destined, for the soil.

    Only then, will they think of, all of your pain, and, your turmoil.

     

    Only then do they weep at you;  but mostly at themselves be-cause, they know you didn’t, get the life you deserved, and when they say “The King Of Pop”, first they gotta say, “He Was”!

     

    You were a person.  You were violated, misread, and criticized.

    Magazines, whenever they could, drenched you, with their lies.

    Jokes, were a tower, its bricks fell upon you;

    Because you kept personal, and prized your private life, like most, of us do.

     

    But you lied there and took it----lied there and faked it;  and wished, you could be free.

    And now you are----free from the pain----free, from the, misery.

    No more accusations.  No more doubts.  No more rage.

    No more attempts or conspiracies, to put you, in a cage.

     

    You are free, to be “that” Michael.  That some, of us know.

    That wish, they could see, at least, one more show.

    Funny, how the dirt, about you, can change thought.

    And then so suddenly, you’re gone;  but will not be forgot.

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    GucciGurl commented on I'm Still Feelin' Ya Mike

    07-04-2009

    I have really enjoyed everything that has been written about him. I live in Memphis Tn where the first King of music lies in his cold deep bed at nite. People still flock every year to our city to pay respect. People that where not even born when he lived or died. Im sure that it will be the same for Micheal. They where so much the same. i just hope that he is at peace. Im not sure that ppl flockin around your home and grave is at peace. keep up the good work

    FLAWLES

    07/04/2009

    True enough. People will be people. I'm sure glad I'mma person.

    jademelissa74 commented on I'm Still Feelin' Ya Mike

    07-03-2009

    I love this side of you LE$. I provided the idea, maybe. You are the king of rhymes/lyrics ;) You have created a masterpiece here! I love it. He will forever be remembered. Thank you for your kind thoughts written on paper! Keep the words flowing!

    FLAWLES

    07/03/2009

    As much as I try not to, you still seem to make me blush. I can't even begin to think of all the poems I've written solely because I've met you acquaintance. You say I'm the king, of lyrics and rhymes. Well I say YOU, are the QUEEN, that can't be mimicked, for all times.

    boriquamorena commented on I'm Still Feelin' Ya Mike

    07-01-2009

    I LOVE THIS PIECE! I t was nicely written and I must say one of your best. In my opinion but all your poems are good.

    FLAWLES

    07/01/2009

    I'm glad this touched you in such a way. Most of the words were supplied by jademelissa74 as a request from me. I wanted to pay my poetic tribute to him but couldn't. I asked her for help. Thank you for the props; but at least half, if not more, is due to her.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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