I'm to blame for this

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My son wrote this.......... His first poem.

I'm to blame for this

I’m to blame for this

One minded way of conception

Thinking myself condemned

Feelings of hate stirring

Thoughts occurring

Evil a turning

Pain I must conflict

For the pain submit

Angry as i may

Sadness too I convey

Flightless love at bay

Emotionless showers sprayed

Wonting connection

Love felt protection

But I’m the only one to blame

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knight4696 commented on I'm to blame for this

05-07-2010

Bravo!!! :) Very cool poem - shows that poetic talent runs in the family! Blue - tell your son I said Great Job! and to keep on writing! :) Ken

bluskyinthenite

05/07/2010

thank you so much Ken... Very much appreciated

bluskyinthenite commented on I'm to blame for this

04-28-2010

I love you my son

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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