Imaginary World

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Imaginary World


Imaginary World


The world I created different from what's real,
A place so beautiful, so peaceful and so clean;
Hunger never exist, no sickness and no pain,
There are no evil thoughts, there's not a single sin.

Love abounds all the time from every smiling face
Kind words are everywhere, there's no room for hatred,
One is free to dream on and achieve what he aimed
No hindering hurdles, failures have no space.

Serenity inspires melody of songbirds,
Crystal spring flowing by shaded by tall green trees,
Fresh air from mountain tops mingled with soft sea breeze,
Golden rays of the sun dance with rainbow's visits.

I was a child dreaming when I opened my eyes,
Looking around I saw, suddenly realized
The world I created was only in my mind,
I had to face real world if I choose to survive.




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Papa commented on Imaginary World

03-21-2010

I pray that Heaven is more than a childs dream. Dream with your eyes open.

arianne

03/21/2010

It is actually these open eyes and what they see that make us dream for what is no longer real..thanks for the comment.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

arianne’s Poems (28)

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