immortal

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    immortal

    life is immortal and we too dream that we are immortal,
    but we forget that our life is immoral
    because in everything we do there is selfishness
    and in our mind we show wolfishness
    but we act as if we are on the path of truth and integrity,
    but on the other hand our life is full of turbidity to ahchieve our goals and
    we dont know where is our souls.
    but still we think we are immortal
    and we showcase our lifes's portal.
    forgetting that we are still mortal.
    when we see our reflection in the mirror,
    we see the saint in ourselves
    but when we open our heart we infer  that in life we have the best trigger.
    because we feel we are immortal
    but lo we are only mortal.

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    GonzoHunter commented on immortal

    11-24-2009

    interesting write. But in my opinion mortality is only physical and nothing more. Our actions are immortal, just as your words will live forever.

    Tempy commented on immortal

    07-30-2009

    we are immortal in essence until the moment of death, then AND only then do we cease to be immortal, and become mortal,

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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