Meticulous Imperfection

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    Meticulous Imperfection

    Meticulous Imperfection

    At a glance you can see

    The other side of me

    Far away or in

    In between

    Its always been just me

    Can't you see

    The chorus I sing

    Be it happy, sad or mad

    Its always been a song

    I sing

    Destiny is my contortion

    I laugh when I cry

    Cry when I laugh

    Singing a song of distortion

    Imperfections heavy burden

    So I laugh when I cry

    Cry when I laugh

    Meticulous imperfection

    That's me

     

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    redbloodink commented on Meticulous Imperfection

    05-30-2010

    you should read my imperfect human....... This was off the charts........... I loved it... I like it and I thank you for sharing it..... red

    bluskyinthenite

    05/31/2010

    Glad you like my Poem. I'm getting to love poetry. Off the charts aye... Yeah i'm a poet and didnt know it. thank you very much.

    WordSlinger commented on Meticulous Imperfection

    04-25-2010

    Nice, time seems fine but it is imperfect also, read my When the Cry Laughed, and the Laugh Cried, ty WS

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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    Break 2
    Take Flight 4
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    Imagine 2
    Nodin's blowing 2
    Sons Poem 3
    Son's Poem 3
    Mobile Cell phone 2
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    "this trash barrel is still on fire" 4
    Total Eclipse 5
    Earth's satellite 6
    Memorial Day Weekend ~Fatality~ 7
    You Don't know Me 9
    Drive By 9
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    Nova 2
    Twinkle In His Eye's 2
    Put on hold 3
    Shadow maker under me 2
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    Cause and effect 2
    regretful sorrow 2nd 2
    Shards of ice pierce my heart 4
    regretful sorrow 6
    the chambers of insecurity 4
    I'm to blame for this 2
    Into the Universe 2
    Memories of contentment 2
    Meticulous Imperfection 3
    Storms a brewing 5
    My mental turmoil my madness 3
    Sands of Time 3
    Narcissus 3
    Steed of Steel 2
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    Looking Glass 3
    Broken Wings 3
    Lost 2
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    Rest 1
    Lost in the Mind 2
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    Lonely for your touch 2
    Rain on the Roof 2
    Life’s small struggles 3
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