imprisoned

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    imprisoned

    A young girl stands alone, tears streaming down her face,
    Imprisoned by a past even time cannot erase.
    Cries of sorrow echo through a vast and empty soul,
    Brought upon by memories she just can't quite let go.
    I reach out to help her, but she withdraws into her shell to hide.
    Afraid to show that she is weak, she keeps her sorrow locked inside.
    She fights her own hard battles, expecting nothing from anyone.
    In the dark and lost in grief, a young girl stands alone.

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    dakotasmama07 commented on imprisoned

    05-28-2009

    Well, thats a beautiful poem full of lots of creativity and I don't know if I could write something like that. Post more!

    Bonofied commented on imprisoned

    03-22-2009

    thats hot

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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    GARDEN OF HOPE 2
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    TIME TO SPARE 2
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