in anticipation of what she brings

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    in anticipation of what she brings
    In the wish of a moonday
    a blanket of cloud-white ashes lay
    quietly upon the frail legs of spring
    Awaiting the kiss of a forgotten fling

    Upon the silence of winddrops
    a tremble of evergreen tops
    fragrant the mood of soon
    Where your love and flowers shall bloom

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    Azzrella commented on in anticipation of what she brings

    09-26-2009

    Beautifully written with a nice flow it leads you to right where you need to be...
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    butterflytatts commented on in anticipation of what she brings

    07-01-2009

    im sorry it has taken me so long to get back to you it was in march when you had read mine and well i have gotten an alarming rate of feedback i do however try to get back to everyone and i have read ur poem and loved it keep the good work and words flowing it truely was a beautiful poem
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    caspiancri commented on in anticipation of what she brings

    03-13-2009

    clever wording loved it
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    beautifuldeath commented on in anticipation of what she brings

    03-01-2009

    with each new piece I read of yours I am more and more in awe of your talent.
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    KJULEST commented on in anticipation of what she brings

    02-02-2009

    Awaiting the kiss of a forgotten fling. I love that line. Let me know when you post more. Talk soon... Jules
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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