In Death Anew

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this is for all you vampires out there

In Death Anew

sick but young, is appears ive always been cursed
to die so young, so sickly from birth
desiring life, i plead for it to all
and so my wish came true next fall

t'was August, with crimson orange leafs
fying around in the cool, gentle breeze
i sat on a bench, just wondering why
glancing longingly, toward the cloudy sky

she came to me, so beautiful, so quiet
i was astonished at her beauty, but i tried to hide it
she sat down next to me, watching the scene
she whispered to me, "Do you want what you've never been?"

i looked into her eyes, soft and so sincere
as if she could help me, i accepted her
she leaned in toward me, and gave me a kiss
her soft gentle touch fro mthe grace of her lips

she pulled away, and wrapped me in a hug
she glided me back, a soft gentle tug
her lips to my neck, she kissed me again
than there was pain, before i knew what happened

pushing her away, my hand to my neck
asking what she did, i began to feel weak
i watched the shadows, inward they crept
some how, i knew i died, and yet only slept

i woke in the dawn of a new day
in a stranger's bed, i lay
turning my head in the shadowy room
i saw her there, the warning came soon

i quietly stood, slipping out of the bed
wondering why i had felt dead
her eyes opened, she watched me move
a small smile appeared like a theme or groove

then i froze, i cant completely explain why
from the sheets she rose and asked, "How'd it feel to die?"
i slowly smiled, my eyes started to glitter
this is now my life, i returned and shifted under the cover

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WingedWolf commented on In Death Anew

10-17-2010

This is one of my favorite poems from you. it really paints a clear picture. keep it up my love! :D

Rhymer commented on In Death Anew

05-18-2010

The bite of a vixon vampir, to die and be reurrected to the one you love. Dark interesting write. 10

EvilPoems

05/18/2010

arnt all mine at least some what dark? :D

cheronld commented on In Death Anew

05-08-2010

now that is not a bad way to die...we should all be so lucky...good poem..

ApaqRasgirl commented on In Death Anew

05-06-2010

wow, that was great, you painted such a sad story with your words that became a happy love, thanks for sharing. love Asha

EvilPoems

05/07/2010

:D

origionalmerlin commented on In Death Anew

05-06-2010

you describe in brief what i call pub crawling with death...( i have been killing time with death since... then , and.... then...(well death and i are members in the same club.. ha ha ha ha

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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