In Hopeless Love

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    In Hopeless Love

    Why are you so heartless?

    You tell me you love me, so careless

    Taking me up to the skies and letting me fall, emotionless

    Thanking my Heavenly Father JEHOVAH, doubtless

    All lust of the flesh going away effortless

    No running back like hounds fearless

    Your stinging kisses striking viciously leaving me breathless

    Never knew such woman, so with tricks and all blameless

    Sweet darling why bite like a scorpion, merciless

    I fell for a beautiful damsel, now I am a mess!

    I thought of a glee future, I thought I was blessed

    Very amazing how love is worst than the game of chess!

    My heart is pierced with pretty roses leaving me powerless

    Now I see why February is about two days less

    After all, it is a dark and cold world nothing but loneliness

    Thought you were my valentine, I am an archer arrow-less

    I was dreaming and saw cupid, all tepidness

    Running towards your love again, but still armor-less

    Blind and lost, so deeply in love, this is true madness

    The heart burn is back! Crying again! So shameless

    I see the light shining so glorious, is it you?

     Sorry, dreaming again, wow! So ridiculous

    I love you and it’s so true, my weakness

    I am on the point of death, in need of you, yet miracle-less

    In crazy love with a daughter of CHRIST, too bad I am so hopeless

     

     

     

     

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    christianprep commented on In Hopeless Love

    10-19-2010

    Its a good poem........ very good write .....() keep up the good work

    gregster

    10/20/2010

    JESUS CHRIST IS THE ONLY WAY.....please read reality of the GOSPEL and thanks for comment read his pain and our salvation adn his grace is sufficient too please

    LadyLuck commented on In Hopeless Love

    10-14-2010

    The dreams grow dimmer and dimmer yet still appear. At the most hated times. The haunting is dreadful your poem is spectacular. 10

    gregster

    10/15/2010

    cool

    Tarlton009 commented on In Hopeless Love

    10-13-2010

    write on, whomever it is you write of is a very lucky women, I sure hope she knows how you care for her, and think you are very sweet to speak of her with such passion,

    gregster

    10/14/2010

    keep on wishing

    precpres commented on In Hopeless Love

    08-16-2010

    That was an EXCELLENT poem. Everything went together so well-ness lol. VERY VERY GOOD WRITE

    gregster

    08/16/2010

    lol.......u should read shaake and wake.........n his grace is sufficient tii eh

    cheronld commented on In Hopeless Love

    05-13-2010

    Wow...Your stinging kisses striking vicously leaving me breathless....that was just one of the lines I loved...this is really really a great poem so relatable that my heart aches and swells up at the same time....now its going to be in my Favs....great work...

    gregster

    05/14/2010

    wow thanks i appreciate....if only that girl felt the same way...i think she cheated on me and left with a lousy excuse saying long distance relations does not work anymore.....lol

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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