In Love With the Enemy

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  • Unrequited Love

    In Love With the Enemy

    Come with me
    into the darkness,
    where no boundaries impose.
    Deep and Blue and Reaching,
    the water of fate.
    With a stained soul
    I crouch in waiting-
    knowing you hate me.
    I will run and cry out
    to break the agonizing calm,
    for your silence blights the heart,
        and sorrow is not shame.

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    Rhymer commented on In Love With the Enemy

    04-25-2010

    In so few words you manage to reach out and grab the readers attention. 10
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    Dano commented on In Love With the Enemy

    04-22-2010

    there is tremendous amount of power held in these words... nicely written
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    MindNumbing commented on In Love With the Enemy

    04-22-2010

    Nicely written, my friend... there's a tangible angst between the lines of this and I can feel your pain as I visualize you screaming into the night, begging for just a little communication. Well done.
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    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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