in love

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    in love

    this feeling overwhelms me a swelling of the heart i never truly thought i would be this happy from the start you take me by the hand and lead me by the heart over a beach of sand thought the grasses that we part with you i let go of intuition and sound my mind  my feelings i cannot help but show to a person who is so kid you kiss my lips so yender embrace me through the night to you i have surrendered my self  so hold on tight so strongly you hold my hand whisper softly in my ear i really feel that you understanted everything you hear i lose my self in you this close i have never been these feelsings are so new to have a  loveer who is my friend.

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    gogant commented on in love

    12-03-2009

    You really pour your heart out here, my dear. It would, if put to the right music, make a fine song................................gogant

    wildpendigus commented on in love

    06-02-2009

    I really like this poem maybe one of your best, I do believe it would be a nice song, since Iwas in A&R for awhile, for a few big companies as well as some independants, it would be nice grecowong@yahoo.com

    Chrisjan commented on in love

    05-29-2009

    A lot of your heart poured out in that creatively written poem. The imagary in your writtings are excellent. Thanks for sharing.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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