In My Collection (En Mi Coleccion)

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    Translated at all of your request!

    In My Collection (En Mi Coleccion)

    (translated)


    I started a collection of beautiful things, there I have put your  eyes, I take them out every night when I need to illuminate my way.


    In my collection are your lips and I take them out so I can experience the most sublime touch.


    There I also have your arms. I use them to give warmth to my body and soul.


    I have in there your smile, and I take it out when I need to bring to life my thoughts and dreams.


    There I keep your hands, I bring them out when my hearts needs of your tenderness.


    There I also keep your words, they come out when I need them to pick up and console my tears.


    I have a collection of beautiful things, all that is missing is your heart....

     

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    orsonav commented on In My Collection (En Mi Coleccion)

    10-22-2009

    This is a wonderful love poem. This poem has great flow. Very beautiful.

    Grito commented on In My Collection (En Mi Coleccion)

    10-21-2009

    Beautiful sentiments, but fear not, that which is missing won't be for long!

    soulwriter commented on In My Collection (En Mi Coleccion)

    09-25-2009

    I can not express the wonderment and excitement I took from your piece to add to my collection of meaningful favorites.... You wrote this in a manner that touches my soul, for it is much to the style of my writing and given with an emotional inflection that I love to read! 10

    StandingBear commented on In My Collection (En Mi Coleccion)

    08-25-2009

    A beautiful work you've created. I would've not been able to enjoy had you not taken the time to translate. I hope you'll have the time to translate another in the near future. Great write.

    wordCollective

    09/03/2009

    Thank you :)

    BlackKnightOS commented on In My Collection (En Mi Coleccion)

    07-29-2009

    This is a very good poem and it was also a good read in Spanish.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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