In My Dreams

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    I wrote this just thinking how things could be different from how they are if people just try. i hope you all enjoy it.

    In My Dreams


     

    In my dreams

         I see a world of peace, not war

         I see a world of love, not hate

    Flowers, not guns

     

    In my dreams

         I see people holding hands, not fighting

         I see people singing, not yelling

    Writing, not crying

     

    In my dreams

         I see people living, not dying

         I see kids smiling, not frowning

    Happiness, not sadness

     

    In my dreams

         I see everything that doesn't happening.

    A new world

        Of everything I imagine

    But is just a dream.

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    kmooney commented on In My Dreams

    03-31-2010

    Very thought provoking and surreal. I like your style. The first 15 or so poems I have posted I wrote over 30 years ago. You may like them. Thanks again for sharing....K
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    Dancer022597 commented on In My Dreams

    01-10-2010

    I like how u compared the good to the bad, most people just say how they want the good and dont say if theyd want the bad gone. Great job and good work!
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    themommyof2 commented on In My Dreams

    01-08-2010

    Hold it in your heart that sometimes dreams come true. All is not lost yet for there is still love in this crazy world. As long as there is love there is hope.
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    mistynites26 commented on In My Dreams

    01-08-2010

    nice write sk8er the perfect image of a utopian dream.
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    GLUB40 commented on In My Dreams

    01-06-2010

    yeah that was really good ....................i just wish i could say the same
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