In my heart

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This started out as bits and pieces of three separate poems until I finally realized that they all belonged in one.

In my heart

This loneliness in my heart
It wasn't there in the start
An empty sensation
A shallow expectation

It's all I ever wished for
To be the one you adore
But some days
Oh some days I don't know why

There's this sadness in my heart
Doing its best to play a tragic part
It seems to be a piece of me
A piece nobody can see

Aching, longing, and wishing
Doubting the happiness I see
This heart on fire, soul burning
And it's getting too hard to breathe 

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Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

digiruler01’s Poems (94)

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In my heart 0
I want... 1
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Closed Doors 0
Never Before 0
Behind Eyelids 0
As it should be 0
Where you have been 1
A Thousand More 0
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Anatomy of my Heart 1
Love's Hell 0
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A Lifetime for you 0
Same Old Places 0
Lost and Never Found 0
Drowning Alice 0
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Same Old Places 0
A Crush 0
As you are 0
So this is love 0
Nothing I can do 1
The Siren 0
Who you are to me 0
Stripped Bare 0
Over 0
The Fall 0
Little Renegade Runner 0
Together 0
I hope you know 0
2 a.m. 0
I blame you (for making me love you) 0
Dreams of yesterday, Dreams of a better day 0
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Not meant for me 0
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Rain 2
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Begin 1
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Amoena 1
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Where the Muse was 0
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Dark Beginnings 0
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Parting 0
Taking 0
Apathetically 0
Moonlit Love 0
A Paroxysm of Love 1
Love...But 0
Red Water running 0
The Blue 0
Love forgot 1
The Emptying Hourglass 1
Flying High 0
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Dance, Lover, and Cover 0
Forever is Never 0
Dying to feel no pain 1
Winter Tears 1
Rubbery 0
The Lost Heart 0
My Angel of Death 0
Ancient Dreams 0
Through the Years 0
Polishing Another's Gem 1
Through my own Looking Glass 0
The Cracked Ruby 0
One Lone Heart 0
So much for a Sad Ending 0
Wind, Water, and Fire 0
First-class Cheater 1
Poison versus the Rat 0
Love and Regret 1
Surviving You 0
Timeless Dawn 0
yOUR Love 0
Fighting Love 0
Aching Hearts 2