in one year

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  • stonie
  • got somethi ngdeep on my mind but too busy at work to manifest it

Poem Commentary

alot of times i speak about death i really mean the death of a way of being, part of ones personaliy, or maybe even getting past something or the end of a chapter in life. i wrote this as a marker to what i had just gone through to remind myself and see where i was the next year. if u a curious i think i was pretty muc hat a stand still when that year passed

in one year

In one year will my life be gone,

 In one year will my rights be wrong,

 Guess i'll see when the time has come,

 Intil then many things can be done,

 for better or worse, no matter the course,

 things seem to just go for the worse,

 i write these things, these fellings, these pains,

 to wipe away the tarnish in my brain,

 to think clearly and sane, no time to wine and wain,

 all these just to relenquish a name

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sundanceatnight commented on in one year

06-17-2009

You said alot in just a few words, it is not so much the words but the emotion and the depth of what you felt when you wrote them.

stonie

06/18/2009

well at the time i felt like it'd be a big year of transformation for me

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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