In Return

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    In Return
    Why can't i stop it
    All i do is get bit
    For all the care i give
    You don't deserve to live
    All you do is take and take
    Leaving me to stand in your wake
    I'm not sure how much longer i can last
    I'm loosing it too fast
    Why do you treat me so
    I always feel so low
    Just leave me alone
    Before I'm nothing but bone

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    XxPoeticxSoulxX commented on In Return

    06-29-2009

    this is beautiful. short sweet and to the point. i can feel your emotion.
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    ArizonaPlay commented on In Return

    02-20-2009

    wow, I must say its refreshing to see the young have there own voice keep it up Tony
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    Plot121 commented on In Return

    02-16-2009

    the title does not seem to work with theme of your piece. I think yor images were clear bbut for the most part left the message kinda confusing.
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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