In The dark

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In The dark

Why is it I feel like I am in the dark?
Is it because people don't want to tell me why?
Is it because they don't want to worry me?
Is it beacuse they are hidding from me?
So I plead with you, please!
Who knows why I am in the dark?
Who will ever know, why???

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LenaM commented on In The dark

12-13-2010

I like this sunshine and maybe it's because I insist on being told the truth of things no matter how ugly something may be . When my daughter got cancer I begged the doctors to always be upfront with me I feared being in the dark more than I feared knowing what was going to happen, This appeals to me on so many levels excellent write

knight4696 commented on In The dark

10-04-2010

Sunshine - Another very interesting write. A question I think we all have .. It all depends on ones perspective of things Why? I don't think any of us really know the answer to this .. but what's more important is that you have someone to help guide you into the light. :) Ken

sunshine33710

10/06/2010

Thank you Ken for the comment. That is so true Ken!

RPT40 commented on In The dark

09-08-2010

I like the angles in this poem. You can interpret this in a few different ways, and each works well. Nice job.

sunshine33710

09/17/2010

Thank you for the comment RPT40!

sandro007 commented on In The dark

08-30-2010

a lot of people are in the dark... the important thing is to have someone to help us get out...

sunshine33710

09/17/2010

Thank you for the comment sandro!

candygirl34 commented on In The dark

08-30-2010

seems like we are always in the dark until a hand pulls us up into the light

sunshine33710

08/30/2010

Thank you for the comment Candy. That is so true.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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