In the depths of mind

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    Our minds are full of the knowledge and memories created for us, by us. . It is a wonderfful opprotunity at our door step. The world we live in is full. .

    In the depths of mind

     In the depths of my mind is a vast ocean
    Of memory's past like waves surfacing
    Bringing forth each day a new wave
    Bright as the morning sun
    Shining down across my ocean like stars
    Reaching for a new approach to an open door
    A book of knowledge preexistence forthcoming
    Another page added to life's memories
    My thoughts wonder with a will to succeed
    Achievements, goals widen my arising adventures
    Looking forward to the next morning sun
    Reopens a new day
    Another thought lesson learned
    The ability to know how
    One door shuts only to open another
    Bubbles of knowledge surface
    Stored in my vast ocean rolls with the waves
    Like the rush of a wave
    Brightens my mind with knowledge
    Makes my day

     

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    Marsink commented on In the depths of mind

    01-09-2010

    I really admire the desciptive tools you've used in this artform. It's just a great work of heart! I tip my hat to you.
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    Bettysrainbow48

    01/15/2010

    Thank you so much Marsink Best to you.

    countrypoet commented on In the depths of mind

    01-08-2010

    The beautiful imagery that you use here inspires and reveals a strong reason for celebrating each new day and the wonderful possibilities that it presents.Thank you for sharing this excellent poem. Terry
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    Teardrops commented on In the depths of mind

    01-08-2010

    you are living life and open to new experiances Never close your mind to new ideas thanks for the read
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    Bettysrainbow48

    01/15/2010

    I thank you to for reading it.

    gogant commented on In the depths of mind

    01-03-2010

    You give life to the dawning of a new day...so many things lay in store...by opening that door. Very nice, Betty............................g
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    Bettysrainbow48

    01/06/2010

    You inspire me to write when I see your good work too. Thank you so much. Thank you for reading my poems.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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