In the faintest of voices.

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    In the faintest of voices.
    To a pouring rain
    In the faintests of voices 
    I heard your name,
    It echoed. 
    from all the places.
    That I'd called you from. 
    In a dream, 
    I held you close again
    But you were gone 
    again, just then.
    I awoke this morning.
    To a pouring rain.
    In the faintest of voices, 
    I heard your name.
    It echoed, 
    from all the places,
    I'd called you from. 
    In a dream, 
    I held you close again
    But you were gone 
    again, just then.

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    koolmom0 commented on In the faintest of voices.

    02-23-2010

    I have had dreams like this, the're amazing and heart breaking at the same time. I love the poem. :) Kool
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    MarionYost commented on In the faintest of voices.

    02-23-2010

    I Liked the flow of this and the wording was amazing. Great write! All the best -Marion-
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    Rhymer commented on In the faintest of voices.

    01-06-2010

    Very nice well written poem, dreams vanishing as we leave one world for another. 10 from me.
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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