In the land of tears

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    In the land of tears

    In the land of tears
    where everyone cries
    no one’s happy
    they want to die
    no food can be found
    the dry ground
    no water nowhere
    in this land of tears
    no fruit upon the tree
    no animals to eat
    even the vegetarian
    can’t find wheat to eat
    sad place to be
    people scream for help
    but who may come to rescue them
    from this place of sin
    generations have past
    a circle in life
    starts again
    cry cry wont you stop
    crying I hear from the hill top
    begin to walk
    and you will find
    just over the hill
    our victory
    spot
    R.L.R.
    11/27/2009 

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    Marsink commented on In the land of tears

    01-11-2010

    I see the tears as an response to the harshness of life, but, at the last line is the 'victory spot'. Is that death and the welcoming of a paradise life?

    bklynrizz commented on In the land of tears

    12-02-2009

    A sad poem. I hope your inspiration wasn't from personal experience.

    Hampton commented on In the land of tears

    11-28-2009

    A sad and forlorn write about a place that has shed so many tears that it can no longer hope.

    blackshadow

    11/28/2009

    Hampton thank you so much for reading in this world i feel a place like this is around somewhere Happy holidays to you and you family

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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