in the night

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    in the night

    sit look up
    but no pass
    because she’s he’s
    yeah, so go on
    to empty box of home
    until you breathe the
    something that you are
    looking for.

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    optimistic commented on in the night

    07-27-2009

    I like your simple yet unique style your words are provactive and expressive very good point of views.

    bigguy commented on in the night

    07-12-2009

    The first five lines lost me but the last three ,well done! I am here to learn new things; I'm possibly missing the point so enlighten me, please. Your thought processes are keen. Papa

    DSLitz

    07/13/2009

    missing the point of the poem? if that was the case, i was watching people in a bar, they were checking out people and i was wondering why they didn't approach the people they were checking out, i guess when they figure it out they'll just go for it...thanks for your comments, i appreciate them.

    dahlusion commented on in the night

    04-22-2009

    Another poetic gem! "until you breathe the something that you are looking for" —— wow!

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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