In The Shower

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    In The Shower

    Now that the water is running and steam is rising. It's gettin hotter and hotter. You have no way of escape. Would you like to be the soap rubbing against my skin. Just so you could be that close. Smooth as coco butter as the water drips from my supple body. Would like to be the towel touching every given part of me. Being a towel you touch me intimately. Or maybe u would like 2 b the water, gently tappin my skin and setting like dwe drops on leaves in the misty mornings of spring. A shower is refreshing, but not as refreshing as me. so mayne u wanna join me. I know u dream of me fullfilling your fantasies. Now that youv'e ran ur hands across the curves of my body. There's no turning back i know that u want me. In the shower exactly where i stand. you whisper in my ear as you touch my hand and say, sweetheart u can either lie to urself or tell the truth. you know he can't do it like i do, so just let it be. because if u really loved him u wouldn't b showering with me.

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    kore commented on In The Shower

    01-24-2009

    nyc so that last comment, was it the water talkin? deeeep

    drewking commented on In The Shower

    01-24-2009

    nice piece of work,, it had me going..

    latanya14 commented on In The Shower

    01-07-2009

    that's a funny ending, didn't expect that.

    muttman1 commented on In The Shower

    01-07-2009

    that was damn good

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