INDECISION

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Somewhere in a place not soon forgotten . . .

INDECISION

Somewhere in a place not soon forgotten ...

In the inner depths of the mind's own mists ~ lie
Nightshades of a different dark ~ where
Distant lies hide behind the truth ~ within the
Emptiness of a shallow heart!
Caught inbetween reality and dream
In the land of never ending questions.
Silently whispering above the screams ~ forever lost
In contradiction!  ~ where
Only the all-knowing ones shall forever reign.
Never really knowing the pain ~ of Indecision.

                  
                                                      (spelled out)
                            
I.N-D.E.C-I.S-I.O.N

 

 I know I’ve been down this road before ….

                                                              But here I go!  ~  Here I go again!!!

     

 

 

 

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JadedJezzabel commented on INDECISION

08-16-2010

love love love acronymnimical poems.......and you did a fine job on this one indeed.

knight4696

08/16/2010

Thanks again JJ. It was my first acrostic poem .. I have a couple others (Happy Birthday and Valentines) I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Ken

Marsink commented on INDECISION

03-20-2010

Quite an acronymnimical poem! I can't imagine how long it took to work on this. Great Creative structure and descriptive elements painting that very picture of indecision! Fine work, Ken!

knight4696

03/21/2010

Thanks again Marsink! This is an older write of mine and my first acrostic poem. It did take me a while to write - but, I love a challenge! :) Thanks again! :) Ken

Teardrops commented on INDECISION

03-12-2010

you had better have a good handle on your mind when you read this its great and yet it makes you truly look at your life and am i like this great poem Marie

knight4696

03/12/2010

This is my first acrostic poem I wrote. I wrote it around the title. Indecision is a hell of a state to be in ...and even worse when you have to revisit it. :) Thanks again for your awesome comments! :) Ken

laurilang5 commented on INDECISION

01-04-2010

Ken, so interesting to see you stretch and succeed once again. This is a challenging format, I am impressed, your talent is so obvious and beautiful!

knight4696

01/04/2010

Thanks Lauri! Your comments humble me so. I really appreciate your sentiments. Thx again friend! :) Ken

danmartyjake1 commented on INDECISION

12-27-2009

Indecision. Def spells it out, for sure. Great writing!

knight4696

12/27/2009

Thanks Marion! :) Yes it definately does. :) I find this style difficult .. but I love a challenge. :) Thanks again, Ken

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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