Infidelity

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    Infidelity

    What are you saying!
    You saying I’m straying
    You saying I’m planning on leaving not staying
    You know what, I’m praying
    You be in my face day out and day in
    Ok then-
    Whatever, I’m tired of all this
    Our two minute bliss
    All the time together…that we miss
    And what! No kiss!
    Man I’m pissed
    That you would do me this way
    And you do this everyday
    And yet I continue to stay
    Man, hey
    I’m just going to say
    That you really know how to ruin something good
    Mess it up of you would
    Try to please me, if you could
    You couldn’t even pop my hood
    You know you should…
    make sure you get all your facts strait
    Before you anticipate…
    What I do and on what date
    You should wait
    Until you know what you’re saying is true
    Until you realize that I’m with only you
    But you don’t and look what you do
    That’s why I’m through
    You talk into a song—make it a melody and it’s clever
    Infidelity, who me? Oh no, not ever…

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    Lucho commented on Infidelity

    08-08-2009

    I love how real this poem is. I can't wait to read more of your writings

    wildpendigus commented on Infidelity

    06-10-2009

    As a songwriter and producer this could be a good song, I think you are very talented and with the right music you could have a potential hit song, Congratulations ! grecowong@yahoo.com

    kduv20 commented on Infidelity

    05-24-2009

    dats wats sup!. i like this poem and i can relate to it a lil bit. the title "Infedelity" is just great for this poem!

    Drivingczar commented on Infidelity

    04-21-2009

    "You couldn't even pop my hood" Nice write.

    JEAGLEFEATHER commented on Infidelity

    04-08-2009

    This is very well written. I enjoy seeing a young poet who seems to connect to the soul. Keep up the great work. Justin

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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