(((Inner Space)))

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Some days are harder than others. Thank God for the best days. Hallelujah and again, Amen!

(((Inner Space)))

Darkest thoughts within my weary head…

Filthy… “get up!” and “out of this bed!!”

“I feel bad, so blue… so very sad

Teary, wishing, praying to be glad


“I don’t want to stay inside my self hate”

Knowing this life is just not my fate,

Wanna be rescued from this place

Could I have fallen from God’s grace?


If a change of mind would change my heart

Then stop asking, “this world to depart!”

Medicines go down harder each day

There has to be another, better way!


Please, pray longer and louder for me?

“Sinking lower still, God, can’t you see?!”

“I think You do, but show me You care,

Won’t you pick me up and hold me there?”

 

©Zep 2010

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Hampton commented on (((Inner Space)))

02-08-2010

Painfull but still inspirational in its pleadings to the almighty for relief and shelter from life's many challemges. Well done

Zep

02/08/2010

O MY !! From you great poet, how very kind of you to read and comment on my poem. I'm grateful, thank you! Ivy

icu2 commented on (((Inner Space)))

02-08-2010

The poet really gives the reader a clear visual of where she is, at this time. Or, it could just be a well written poem about something out of the air...either way............it's very good.

Zep

02/08/2010

Wow, yes this was over a period of darkened shrouds encasing me. I have won that battle, along with the help of our Almighty, that is. :D Thank you for your time and compliments.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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