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  • Lost Love

    Inscription


    Shadowed by the moon,
    two hearts
    reveal truth...
    trip-the-light-fantastic...
    and fade,
    solemnly,
    back to the
    tormented animation
    from whence they came.
    The greatest damage;
    cognition:
    verity can never
    gain ground
    for what was fated
    a heavy-laden heart...
    inscribed by
    two broken souls.

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    Cosmos commented on Inscription

    06-03-2009

    I think I realize why I like your poetry so much now after this poem. I can relate to this one if its referring to what I think it is. If so, than it goes without saying. If not than nevermind. I really enjoyed this one. =)

    dustyrebel70 commented on Inscription

    05-28-2009

    That is a sad poem, I think it had a nice florw to it , heartbreaking as it might be I liked the contents of the poem

    thoughtsaflame

    05/29/2009

    Thanks Dusty. This is one of my "trying to come out of the block" pieces. I'm glad you liked it. :o)

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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