INSIDE A BROKEN HEART

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  • ladypooh
  • I am back,stronger and better. I have truely missed everyone,and I will be writting soon God bless each and everyone.

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INSIDE A BROKEN HEART

( ME )

I WANT TO KNOW!  CAN YOU FEEL ME?

There's something down inside of me
That makes me search this world endlessly,
Finding things, deceiving me, hurting me, abusing me.
Pushing me down inside of me, I want to say that's not right you see...
...pain, misery and strife became apart of me, doing thing that was destroying me,
Taking my life from me, causing me to be disrespectfully, using drugs constantly;
My home, my kids was took from me, but I didn't stop you see, it had a strong control of me, and I'm lost...lost...lost inside of me.

Now I hope you're feeling this, because there's a lot more to it.

This cloud that I now ride, it takes me even deeper inside.

Now becoming apart of it, my colors are blue, black, and purple because of it.

Now there's a beat to this, pain, misery and strife...dance to it.

 This is what they did; they made me, hear the tunes that they put in me.
It's not R&B, it's not even Spiritually.

This is what I hear in me, playing out the aches of me:

My heart it goes...
...BUMP BUMP,BUMP BUMP

The hurt it goes...
...( THUMP THUMP )( THUMP THUMP )

The tears that fall...
...PLUMP PLUMP PLUMP PLUMP PLUMP

After being hit...
...BOOM BOOM,BOOM BOOM,BOOM BOOM

The sound when I say...
...STOP,STOOOOOP STOOOOOP,STOP

Dress in these colors of purple,black, and blue. Made up for my next date who's JEALOUSY and HATE. Who takes me even deeper inside this messed-up state, controlling my mind, causing me to do things that could very well make me serve some time.

Stripped from all that I am and all that I'm not, and all that I ever could be, used and abused, at the end of ride, I wish to God I could die. I drop my head and cry, but then I meet another guy who says: Grace and Mercy came along, and sung this song: " Oh No, Oh No No He already paid the price for me" then took a hold of me, and told me about Christ Almight!
Who reached  down inside of me and healed that broken heart of me, created something beautiful to see, then whipered these words to me, about the colors that I see; Black is the sin I was born in, Blue is the symbol of Heaven and Authority, Purple is the color of Royalty, Red is the color of the blood He shed for me. Now I have something that flow-up out of me,that makes me dance to a different beat. the beat of joy, peace and harmony.

Here's about what I have, that's the reason my heart didn't laugh, you said you wanted something out of me; this is the END of my misery.

NOW ARE YOU FEELING ME!!!

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racegirl6670 commented on INSIDE A BROKEN HEART

06-21-2009

For all that you have suffered, there is something to be said for the courage you have shown to rise above it all to come to where you are now. I feel you, and I commend you. Both in turning your life in the direction you are going, and in your powerful gift of expression. Well Done!!

ladypooh

06/27/2009

Thank you for such a nice commit

FlowerGirl commented on INSIDE A BROKEN HEART

06-19-2009

Wow! I Can't Even Imagine what you must have gone through, with all the Pain and Suffering. Words Cannot Subdue! You Are Truly Blessed, To Have Found Yourself Again. To Have God's Love! His Angels, They Protected You Beneath Their Wings! They Give Out Gold Metals and Awards, For People with High Achievements, and Accomplishments. You Deserve One! But, God Has His Own Awards. He Said, Good Job My True And Faithful Servant. Many Blessings Await You. when You take One Step, I'll Be There To Take Two For You! If You Ever, Hear The Past Knockn Or Feel The Pains, Of Small Remains, Take A Moment To Pray.... Go Into The Spirit Listen To His Voice, I know, You Can Hear It! Sing This Melody In your Heart, Perhaps You Have Heard This Somewhere Before. It's a Real Heart Breaker, and Much More. As You Focus On God...... The Words Go Something Like This............... ." Did You Ever Know..........That, You're My Hero.......... Your Every.Thing I...... Would Like To Be...........Yeah......... I Could Fly High..............er Than An Ea.....gle...Cause, You Are The Wind..........Beneath My Wings.......................... You Are The Wind..........Beneath My Wings...... That Is Such a Beautiful Song. I Take My Hat Off To You, For Having The Courage To Rise Above The Muck An Mud, To Be The Best Person You Can Be You Got That Second Chance, To Live Life And Be Free! But, Let's Continue To Pray For Others. That Feel They've Lost The War And Have No Chance To Win. Let's Pray That as God, Speaks,They Too Will Listen In. You Are A Blessing, And An Inspiration to Many. This poem will Reach Thousands, They will Be Thankful, For All you Have Shared, Your Good , The Bad Your Pain, And Despair. Be Blessed!

ladypooh

06/27/2009

Thank you my dear sister for you insight on my write

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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