Inside Cry

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Inside Cry

So much sadness

So much pain

my soul feels lost

my heart feels slain.

 

Complete confusion

it deepens each day

unfamiliar emotions

with my mind do play.

 

I ask for the council,

I need understand

for the shaking to cease

from the depths of my hands.

 

©1985 KMDavis-Scheuer (Age 14)

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Rhymer commented on Inside Cry

08-10-2010

Feel the pain emitting from this write soaking all the way through to the bone. 10

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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