Inside Her Wall's

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    Inside Her Wall's

    People build wall's to keep others out,
    I build wall's around myself.
    To see who cares enough,
    To break them down.
    These night's are never ending,
    The sun never comes around.
    My hearts weeping in the darkness,
    Crying without a sound.
    Forever too close to my eyes,
    Drift on and off to sleep.
    My dreams are filled with loneliness,
    Tears running down my cheeks.
    No one should feel this lonely,
    To ever feel this down.
    With constant pain and sadness,
    Crying without a sound.
    In every tear that falls,
    No one hear's her cries.
    This broken hearted agony,
    Inside her wall's.

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    zan commented on Inside Her Wall's

    01-20-2010

    the pain/agony of loneliness............so well written especially the first few lines............brilliant!!!

    writerspassion commented on Inside Her Wall's

    02-04-2009

    very nice, i can really feel this emotion

    markrohaley commented on Inside Her Wall's

    01-30-2009

    It will never change till Jesus invited in :)

    dahlusion commented on Inside Her Wall's

    01-28-2009

    Lovely feeling of sadness, longing, & agony…

    allenjermy commented on Inside Her Wall's

    01-25-2009

    I like it. Very real. well written. i gave you a 10, a winner for sure. Take Care... Don Folks

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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