inside the ride

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    inside the ride

     oh love, please take me for a ride?
    i wish to brave your roaring tide.
                please take me for a ride,
    i want to hit top scoring high.
                            up, down, all around
                   treat my ears to that traveling sound.
                beat my fears of falling, SLAT!, to the ground did i.
      won't you please,take me for a ride?
         no rhyme
         no reason
         no questions, why?
                             why now i'm ready for that ride.
                before it's been dangling outside,
                   far from sin hanging inside.
                                                inside love's ride abide by do i.
                                 knowing with love, i can stride with pride.
        and to find inside my mind,
          no longer shakey, having to hide.
    oh love, please take me for a ride?

                   tyke

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    knight4696 commented on inside the ride

    09-09-2009

    Tyke - This is a little different. I'm not quite sure what to make of it? Love as a ride??? Hmmm ... Love can be Frightening with it's Extreme Dizzying Heights, Catapulting Fears, Haunted Hallways drawing you into it's Widow's Web. But, then again ... there's always the Tunnel of Love. I love amusement parks! :)
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