Inside

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    Inside

    The me inside, is what few ever see.
    The me inside is, wild and free.
    The me inside is, turned away by the outside look.
    The me inside is, not lightly to be took.
    The me inside is, understood wrong when expressed.
    The me inside is, dimmed in the light but flourishes in the dark.
    The me inside is, should not be measured by a mark.
    The me inside, just wants to shout.
    The me inside, was bottled up for too long.
    This is the me inside, expressing itself.
    This is how I shout.

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    lithiumblack commented on Inside

    07-12-2009

    Great style, and determination. This is the kind of poetry that makes you stand up and take notice. The only thing I would suggest is to watch your grammar, but it's merely a suggestion, not a criticism. Sometimes poetry works better when you're left to your own devices, and take the time to rectally violate the old tried and true way of doing things. Great job.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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