Inside

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    Inside

    Sometimes I get this anger in me
    I can't explain it but it can be blinding
    Maybe its just emotions
    Something inside me that's burning
    Its selfish to feel this hate
    But I can't help it
    Would you get it
    Maybe not
    I get so angry its almost life threatening
    Why do you do the things you do
    Get pissed off and shut down
    So mad at the world
    Why create this kind of pain
    Why give us free will to act as we please
    Muzzles should come free
    Why make the decisions that I make
    I may not regret them
    But I don't like them
    Hating yourself should be a virtue
    Why
    Because knowing what you hate about yourself makes you wise
    It helps you mend and begin to heal
    But till I get to loving this person
    I have to reach inside
    It won't be easy
    Sure as hell is something I don't want to do
    But if I want my dreams to come true, I gotta make it happen
    And if it don't
    Than hatred will consume this being

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    jesusfreake commented on Inside

    11-30-2009

    wow...this poem makes me speechless...the anger feels numbing to read almost...and i love the emotions expresssed through this poem that u feel because u make me feel them as well...awesome-ly (

    carmentis commented on Inside

    07-08-2009

    this is how i feel when i get my own blind fits of anger very well put every one of your words on this work speak to me well done

    PRober commented on Inside

    06-27-2009

    very emotionally astute... a mirrored image of it's author's mindset perhaps? we all have em! good job!

    wildpendigus commented on Inside

    06-22-2009

    This is very good showing what kind of talent you have and I like the title and the content and the picture you have painted in my mind keep writing, practice makes perfect! grecowong@yahoo.com

    SmileyAngel138

    06/22/2009

    thank you so much!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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