Insomnia

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    Welcome to my Crazy life ha ha ha !!!!!

    Insomnia

    Tick Tock
    Early to bed early to rise
    if only I could close off my mind like I close my eyes
    Body so tired brain so awake
    wondering how much more of this I can take
    Serious contemplation and pointless consideration
    Deprive me of slumber in this endless situation
    like why do the children of this world have to weep
    or why is a duck called a duck? Is this what keeps me from my sleep?
    Tick Tock
    The clock keeps taunting with endless ticking
    turmoil inside of thoughts and questions picking
    Picking away ticking away
    easing my night into another day
    If I go to sleep now I'll have eight hours to sleep
    guess I better start counting sheep
    One....Two.... wait why a sheep? why not a cow?
    guess I will only have seven hours now
    Tick Tock
    OK OK I won't waste a minute more
    I'll turn off the light and shut the door
    But wait was that a sound maybe I should go and see
    Maybe it was nothing but I'll still get up to pee
    Tick Tock
    Back in my bed once again in the dark
    hey maybe I should plan a day at the park
    Damn it go to sleep in the morning you have things to do
    like go to the store take the kids to school and there a couple of boxes you need to go thru........
    Wait just a minute this is not the time to think
    hmmmm my mouth is dry I think I need a drink
    Tick Tock
    Dusk is long gone and dawn rapidly draws near
    still my mind is racing and just will not clear
    Imagining fluffy clouds and puppies to erase images of the movie that made me sick
    Oh no only four hours left man time passes quick
    Silence is deafening, music stimulates to much
    hey what is the thing in the corner called? I think it a hutch...
    Tick Tock
    What the hell is wrong with you can't you just rest
    losing this battle but trying my best
    Wait what is this my thoughts are blurry and grey
    eyes are so heavy as images slip away
    Silence becomes a comfort as I drift into peace
    tension vanishes as consciousness cease
    ((( RING ))) ((( RING ))) ((( RING )))
    Eyes pop back open and are flooded with light
    Facing another day after another sleepless night
    Body exhausted mind working slow
    If I drink enough coffee maybe no one will know
    Tick Tock
    Day finally over once again facing night
    jump in my bed turn off the light
    Covers all around me soft pillow under my head
    if I were anymore sleepy I think I would be dead
    Blackness closing in welcoming sleep
    hey why do some people say birds go chirp chirp and others peep peep
    Oh no not again question with answers that I can not find
    If I go to bed now I'll have.....................Ahhhhhhhhh Screw it , Never mind!

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    bigguy commented on Insomnia

    07-12-2009

    Whoa girl! Take a pill and chill. I have been there and back again several times myself. I once told my subconscious that I refused to go to sleep and of course it rebelled and knoted me out. You have a grip on the reality of insomnia. Good job, I think you have some talent to work with.

    SEVEN commented on Insomnia

    07-06-2009

    Grrrr.....After reading this now I can't sleep....thanx alot... yeah why not cows or chickens? they still make noise....lol Good write......kudo points for u...

    Chaos128 commented on Insomnia

    07-04-2009

    Silentwriter this is hilarious! You've got too much on your plate or your intellect is too great and won't let you rest. I recommend meditation...or a fifth of Chivas. Ha ha ha! This is great!

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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