Intense Love Making

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    Intense Love Making

    Can you imagine intense love making vaginal and oral orgasms that leaves your body shaking.
    From the kitchen to the bed the bathroom and even the couch, as my shaft enters; you say i'm a bad mother shut your mouth.
    Like a lustrous fountain you're so dripping wet, it's like climbing Mt. Everest something we'll never forget.
    What I wanna do to you should be a crime, intense love making I'm so high it feels like I'm flying.
    But this 747 will never crash, you give a quick sigh as I flip you over on your knees and smack you on your ass.
    The sweat on your body makes you shine like the sun, this intense love making is like a good show on t.v. so I would love t see a re-run.
    As I see you reach your peak you're almost done, I stop open your lips and in goes my tongue.
    You grab me by the dreads and begin to move my head, you guide me to your g-spot I love to see those shaky legs.
    The way that you are moving I know you ain't faking so loud ypu are the neighbors are waking. Don't be jealous or mad just join in on some intense love making.

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    AshRenee commented on Intense Love Making

    07-14-2009

    Wow :) It's. . . intense. It's good, though. I wouldn't consider this 'love making' though. I hate to say it, but I don't see love.

    cottonluv commented on Intense Love Making

    03-25-2009

    nice work.keep up the good work

    janetdawson commented on Intense Love Making

    03-24-2009

    u didn't do bad i would have taking a different turn . when writing about love making its always best to give it from there view of what they want from you. but yoo did very good :)

    prissy03 commented on Intense Love Making

    03-24-2009

    wow i dont know what to say

    mistyparish commented on Intense Love Making

    03-24-2009

    omg. This is great. LOVE IT!

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