Interferance

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    Interferance

    Tears on my pillow
    there each night
    They take all my strength
    none left to fight

    I taste of salt
    from many tears
    Intense pressure built up
    from all my fears

    Who can I turn to?
    Do I run to You?
    If that is my decision,
    what will you do?

    Now come horrifying thoughts
    My mind fills with my past
    Memories come rushing in
    so nothing will last

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    redbloodink commented on Interferance

    02-02-2010

    I'm going to say this write didn't have the intensity the last few did.... I still liked it especially the beginning.... red

    redbloodink

    02/02/2010

    I have to agree with Fluv...... I was going to have to leave that comment... cause they have been 10 or way more from me...... but this was a solid 10....... red

    fluv77 commented on Interferance

    03-02-2009

    I have read about four of your poems already and all of them in my opinion have been very strong tens. I tryied to re-rate it but it want let me give the tens, only a point or so higher than the one posted. who's rating these poems. are they kidding. TEN.

    Vincent commented on Interferance

    02-04-2009

    (GP) I think you are a good poet, smiles Vincent

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

    ndg’s Poems (35)

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    Words Not Needed 0
    Contemplation 25
    You Almost Had Me 6
    She Still Does 4
    Truth 8
    Interferance 1
    True Love 1
    Goodbye 1
    Addiction 1
    Void 5
    Untitled 2
    Driving Force 3
    Yahweh 7
    Draw Me 3
    Fortune 0
    Wonders 0
    Had I Known 2
    Hollowed Out 0
    Fear 1
    Do You Ever? 2
    Love Remember Me 8
    Voracious 8
    Banishment 4
    You Said `94 4
    Today`03 0
    Prized Ehibit `07 1
    Chimera -1
    Untitled 1
    Filmy `04 2
    Release `05 2
    For You 5
    Perception 3
    Happy Mother's Day 1
    Siren 3
    Cave Dweller 10