Is It How It Is

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Is It How It Is

Too much is hidden
Too much is given

Be ashamed of your sins
Be proud of your wins

What has not happened;must happen
Feel free to come out;to go deep in

I see what  I can;but wonder
What I see;Is It How It Is.

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SilverGirl commented on Is It How It Is

11-14-2009

Very good poem.. short, concise.. with a huge message. Great job. Agreeing with Dumplin.. I would love to see you add a bit more to this as well. It is lovely how it is, though I think a little more would paint a bigger picture.. Hugs.. SG

dumplin commented on Is It How It Is

10-21-2009

This is nice. I like the concept. I wish it were longer. It leaves me wanting more.

aggieprof commented on Is It How It Is

10-19-2009

Well done. Very profound thoughts. Love the contrasts.

bforibus commented on Is It How It Is

10-03-2009

wow. this is philosphy at its pinnacle. to see the world from both sides of the coin. i love the line:Be ashamed of your sins Be proud of your wins. this within itself battles each other. great job

Sufie

10/03/2009

hey.. i wrote it after pasting the two coins together

knight4696 commented on Is It How It Is

10-03-2009

I like this one Sufie - you pose a very good question ? Sometimes things aren't always as they appear , but then again - sometimes they are.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

Sufie’s Poems (7)

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Holiness within 2
The Change 4
Free limits 6
God is busy 3
Two friends in me 4
Coupled Couplets 4
Is It How It Is 7