Is she back

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    Is she back

    I am dying and burning, do you see?

    My world is upside down and collapsing, am I me?

    Enslaved by her beauty, but wish not to be free

    This not true, is I dreaming?

    I feel empty in this gore nightmare, this is insanity

    What did I do to you and what are you doing to me?

    You gave me kisses and hugs, made me happy!

    Now its ignorance and curses all making me weary

    Stabbing, ripping, and breaking my soul brutally

    You are hurting me, literally killing me

    Do I know you? You are no bloody felony!

    Please stop, this crime is malicious, I am drowsy

    Was I a sluggard in loving you? If so I am profoundly sorry

    How do I prove myself, help me understand you lovely?

    You are leaving with a lousy explanation and all blurry

    My sweet heart, wait! I am in bottomless need

    I am sad and lonely, please my sweet honey

    I’m lost in this love maze with no clue, this is frightening

    Along a river of gold I see you pass by, I feel merry

    Stay! Do not go I truly missed you cutie

    Running through a daisy garden as your beauty is surpassing

    It is really you again, miraculous, I am no more freezing

    You love is truth, your warmth is real, I am melting

    Yes it is proper, no game just craziness, you are pretty!

    I am alive and free, I have hope now, and you do love me!

    Love defeated all mischief, indeed we have victory

    How great am I, you saved me for I was so deadly

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    LadyLuck commented on Is she back

    10-21-2010

    a beautiful poem of love sorrow Death and revival! Loved it

    gregster

    10/22/2010

    COOL

    Embraced commented on Is she back

    10-15-2010

    Not what I had expected from you. I enjoyed this. Emotion, and raw. Thanks for sharing this with me. E~

    gregster

    10/16/2010

    cool

    Tarlton009 commented on Is she back

    10-13-2010

    very emotional, I can feel the passion and anguish in each stanz and reminds me of friends that I have lost in my past, although I see that they realationship spoken of is one on a deeper level that friendship. the feeling of longing for someone and finding that they are not there is always a hard thing, but do not let in drag you down, for life is a gift and love is forever in the arms of Christ.

    gregster

    10/14/2010

    thanks

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

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