Is The Flame Dying?


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Today, I said "I love you so much" and you said "I love you too" But not once did you say "I love you" for yourself... I still love you just the same... Is it dying for you, though???

Is The Flame Dying?

I don't know why,
But things are not the same.
Something is different...

Do you still feel the same for me?
Why do I get the sence that you don't?
Baby, tell me
Did I do something wrong?

I don't want our love to fade,
But the way you said "I love you" today
It was not the same...
What did I do?

Maybe it's just me,
Illusions come to me often...
But whatever it is if there is anything,
What did I do?

Is the flame for me,
within you, dying?
My love for you so strong,
Is yours for me ending?

Tell me,
Am I just imagining things
Or is this real?
Is the flame dying?

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Ninjaboy commented on Is The Flame Dying?


your just imagining things, i really wish you would stop worrying about these things, really, im not going anywhere, i still love you, as i have told you over a thousand times, i promise, it isnt dying

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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