It Cracked

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  • Lost Love

    It Cracked

    These thoughts tickle my mind
    2 dreams plus reality
    is a bit much for me

    and yet i feel over powered by what you do
    and how you do it

    secrets of the heart
    never to be spoken
    to no one not even ourselves

    The cool breeze that passed up your spine
    my conquest
    the aching need in my chest

    wanting to put this all to rest
    pacing across the floor

    feeding the need to know more

    what was her name
    you can not say
    for the sake of us both its better that way

    trouble mind is what is set
    why did you have to make this...
    us.. so complex

    couldn't you be happy with what was
    and how it would have ended

    sparkles just from your wine
    given hints of the time

    tell me
    would she sell for a dime or more
    So tired i cant speak
    my thought are all empty
    and my feet have fallen
    my tongue is stiff
    my hands are sore

    was this just a tease
    away to lose me
    set me free with ease

    i am done
    this battle is over
    and the war you have won
    before this torture had even begun

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    FUBAR93 commented on It Cracked

    05-11-2009

    This is magnifique! You have quite a gift, chéri.

    stallion commented on It Cracked

    05-11-2009

    nice..

    Spiralout1022 commented on It Cracked

    05-07-2009

    i can relate on a number of references i feel that a few of my past realationships combined could account for all the feelings that came to mind, good read

    bforibus commented on It Cracked

    03-28-2009

    absolutely an excellent write. i love the third person emotion in this poem. the insecurites and the despair was an interesting touch to a motivational poem.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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