It Cuts Like Knife The Hunger that last

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It Cuts Like Knife The Hunger that last

 

 

In shadows of secret places it grow
Resistance is futile, beckoning, come
Deepest pain puts salt on open wounds,
She knows.

 

Hunger, feels like, tears, or pain.
Madness comes with a full moon or heavy rain.
Instinct drives a moth to the flame.
It’s as natural as an infant sucking ring.

 

Dare I embrace? Letting it, roam free
It engulf blinding me
Hunger’s clueless let it be.
Don’t embrace a dangerous thing.

 

In fears, with tears, the powers strong,
Invisible thread’s too tight, too long.
Love’s hunger engulfing no less 
Beneath the surface, it’s subjective at best.

Poison’s gigantic no less.
A temporary fix at best,
Strategize move forward to succeed
It's a monumental task indeed.

Sneak around be quite as mice
Don’t fall into the same hole, twice.
Surrender’s, sweet as honey to taste
Pleasure replaces hunger’s waste

O Captain! My Captain!
The ship has weathered the storm.
The prize you sought is won.
Accepting love’s hunger is done.

 

© 02-June-2009 Cat’s Meow

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Hampton commented on It Cuts Like Knife The Hunger that last

07-14-2009

This is a nicely done poem that expresses a multitude of feelings in its journey to discover one's hunger to be loved.

CatsMeow

07/14/2009

Love brings more riches then gold, behold the consequences of what you pray. Thanks for the review.

skybumper commented on It Cuts Like Knife The Hunger that last

06-22-2009

This is captivative love in the secret of love form, much needed and surpressed. this gem show a needed love that has been in waiting and ready to find it's match. much wisdom. I give it a 10.

CatsMeow

07/14/2009

You nailed it! I believe most words come from an inner longing and a deeper need. Thanks for your review.

Sempersperans commented on It Cuts Like Knife The Hunger that last

06-07-2009

This is clearly written by a sensitive woman, who --tiring of loneliness--hopes for love , even 'though experience tells her it can be dangerous or hurtful as often as comforting & fulfilling . She deserves to find a man who will care for her as well as yielding to their mutual need of erotic pleasure ! Her grammar and spelling need refinement , but her message is conveyed clearly & with evident sincerity ; persevere !

CatsMeow

07/14/2009

I appreaciate you candor and honesty. Yes! we all can improve. I am no master of words but i love to try.

DragonAngel commented on It Cuts Like Knife The Hunger that last

06-06-2009

I think it rocks I am more into rhymes of a sort but it reaches out none the less and grabs ya makes ya think

CatsMeow

06/06/2009

Thank you for reading it! I am a bit naive in wanting to be an writer and poet. But I have a great love for trying to express myself. I have had many years meeting others who write. At various classes, workshops and conferences including meting Jean M. Auel

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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