It Doesn't Follow...

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  • Lost Love

    It Doesn't Follow...

    Clouds roll in
    And the sun is gone
    And shimmering star light
    Fades at dawn

    The glory of the moon
    Can be eclipsed
    Like a light in a room
    At the flick of a switch

    The flame of a candle
    When deprived of air
    Will barely leave signs
    That it was ever there

    If these hold true
    Explain how or why
    My love for you
    Refuses to die...

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    BridgetBowen commented on It Doesn't Follow...

    02-10-2009

    I love this one too. I like the use of simile. Very good poem.

    SAYANDSEE commented on It Doesn't Follow...

    12-13-2008

    VERY ENJOYABLE. TRUE LOVE NEVER DIES.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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