IT MIGHT HAPPEN (random thoughts, half finished)

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wishin....

IT MIGHT HAPPEN (random thoughts, half finished)

IT MIGHT HAPPEN, yeah right....

Perhaps a thousand years from now, in a different lifetime, on a different planet.
I might not have to slave my life away, doing work I really hate. I could come back and be wealthy.
                              yeah right....

In some other dream, some other time, in a different dimension. Where as of yet, I've not lost my mind. Where every day is Saturday, and there is no such thing as working your life away. And I could do just as I wanted.

All I really wanted was a cabin by a lake, in the mountains.
With no more work to do, a pickup truck and a dog, that would be nice too, with enough food and supplies to see me through. And I almost forgot, I would also need a canoe.

And in that cabin by a lake, snuggled safely in a  pine grove, I'd also need a  woodstove. A cabin in the pines, on a high plateau, by a small lake with a meadow.
A place hidden away and peaceful,  where no one else would go.

A cabin with three rooms and a loft for sleeping. Nearby, a crystal clear spring, with ice cold water, just right for drinking.
But then again, i know just what you might be thinking. That before he started to write, this guy must have been drinking......

No, I was'nt. But sometimes I believe I should.

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ansari commented on IT MIGHT HAPPEN (random thoughts, half finished)

07-16-2010

I loved every line except for the last of course factually . a marvellous flow of words what a beautiful song. it's everyone's dream. you got tons of talent. I wish I had.....

california

03/20/2011

ansari, thanxx much. guess I was in a whackey mood when I wrote this one, glad you enjoyed it................

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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JUST A MEMORY 1
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IT MIGHT HAPPEN (random thoughts, half finished) 2
untitled 0
IS IT LOST? 1
SOME WOMEN 0
THE SECOND TIME 0
RISE LIKE THE PHOENIX 0
IF ONLY..... 0
IN A DREAM 0