The Fool

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  • Enjoying my reality yet I'm still a dreamer

The Fool

There she is...
She whom I've seen a time or two or three
There she is the one from my dreams
She whom I dare not touch though I have 
Funny it's not but still I laugh
At myself sometimes how great it would be
Time, space and opportunity
In her eyes I've seen it oh how she has entertained
The thought of being so close we're breathing the same 
Feeling warm in the rain stop then starting again
Finding pleasure in pain sucking sugar from cane
From her head to her feet feel her heart when it beats
By the smell of the wine I can tell that it's sweet
I smile when she smiles this is far from a game
She looks me in the eye and calls me by name
Crazy thoughts take over my head
Right before she says, "Hello Bobby"
I say, "No it's Craig"
Damn...



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slimgoodwoody commented on The Fool

07-29-2013

Didn't see that one coming!! Lol! I was wondering where the fool was coming in but you got there quick! DAMN!

jmylez commented on The Fool

07-27-2013

Dude!!! Love this one, love this style of writing keep things suspenseful and ending strong, great poem, great delivery keep it up

Tuts commented on The Fool

04-05-2013

Got's to be more careful lol, nice work. Powerful and funny.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

CraigStyle’s Poems (18)

Title Comments
Title Comments
VENTING 2
You Took You From Me 3
Severance 2
The Fool 3
A Girl & A Guy 2
At a loss for words... 1
A Heart That's been Scarred 4
Sincerely, Just because...... 6
The day I Smiled 3
IN LOVE (Again for the first time) 1
Love In Question 9
Still Here Part 2 1
ENOLA 4
JUST A FRIEND 9
GIVE ME PEACE 5
WHY HE CRIED 10
Still Here 9
BROKEN 8