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  • Sadness

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    The numbness i feel
    just as real
    though not physical
    it's so pitiful
    the things you do
    they hurt me too
    the things you say
    day by day
    it keeps getting worse
    like a curse
    what's happened to me
    it shouldn't be
    the way it burns
    how it churn and churns
    my hatred for you
    it's nothing new
    it won't go away
    forever it'll stay
    the way it feels inside
    as if, i've died

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    Phoenix9 commented on It

    02-17-2009

    very good, keep it up

    cottonluv commented on It

    02-17-2009

    thats a sad poem.but i like it a lot.good work

    chadallac74 commented on It

    02-16-2009

    Way to go out there on a limb... nice rhytym to it.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

    Tony’s Poems (79)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    Escape 0
    Simplicity 1
    Unser Leben....Our Life 0
    Nie...Never 0
    Freedom 0
    Recoil 0
    Du & Me 0
    Lass Uns Rennen....Let Us Run 0
    Menschen...Hu
    mans
    0
    Wiederholung.
    ..Repitition
    0
    Balance 0
    Finality 1
    Zusammen...To
    gether
    0
    Für Dich....For You 1
    Mein Geist....My Mind 0
    Uns.....Us 0
    Fall......Fal
    l
    0
    Falschen Anschuldigung
    en...False Accusations
    0
    Sicherheit...
    Safety
    0
    Brech Aus...Break Out 0
    Shadow 0
    Cold 0
    Certitude 0
    Truth 0
    Consciousness 0
    Sacrifice 0
    Two Become One 0
    Sleep 0
    Broken 1
    Punishment 0
    Reality 0
    Warranted Infliction 0
    Sky 1
    Solitude 0
    Future 0
    Lies 0
    Rules 1
    Unavoidable 0
    Empty 0
    Maze 0
    Alone 0
    Sporadic 0
    Struggle 0
    Impossible 0
    Ambush 0
    Life's Song 0
    Geh....Go 0
    Nicht Mehr.......No More 0
    "Gods" 1
    Wonders 0
    Das Ende.....The End 0
    Vengance 0
    Obstacle 0
    Gone 0
    Ewigkeit....E
    ternity
    0
    Release 0
    Hidden 2
    Incapable 1
    Breakdown 1
    Guardian Soldiers 1
    One Who Once Was 0
    Creative Process 0
    What Am I? 1
    The Overpowering Desire 5
    Spirit 1
    Insanity 2
    Constantly 1
    Present Existence 5
    Pain Inside 1
    Liebe.... Love 1
    Banning Books 3
    Iron Man 0
    What You Do 2
    Someone 9
    IDK 6
    Deprivation 12
    In Return 3
    Identity 3
    It 5